References

You're going to have to go back and do this again because none of your references is anywhere near adequate. You cannot use online magazine articles as references; they are opinion, not fact. In addition, if you trace the references of those articles, they refer to other opinion pieces and not factual studies. Your other references are broken.

My advice: research this topic properly by studying adequate sources, such as academic journals.

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